Advise on Roughcut

We asked for some advise for our video as there was clearly something wrong with the video. We knew the content was good but there was something wrong with our video. Tanya the head of media kindly came and viewed our roughcut the feedback we got was helpful giving us confidence in the content side of things but showed where we could improve. We now know to cut up the story line and put it in paralelle with hakans rapping to make it flow better and be more visually interesting throughout.