Feedback from pitch

Question 1:-
How will we fade away Clara?
We will do this by having Saul staying very still and stopping the camera and Clara getting out of bed, then filming Saul sitting in the same position. We will then use the fade one clip into the other to make it look like she faded out not that she jumped out.

Comment:
We need to put more images on to our pitch

Comment:
We need to take pictures of the process of rolling the 'Spliff' to show that it is not actually weed. We also need to acknowledge that if this went on TV the 'spliff' would be fuzzed out.